The Dragon Trains "Ruthless" Randy Rampage

OoC: Hey all. First match here in UWC. One time appearance. Randy , im basically going to run you through the basics, how to write a good match, buildup, etc.. I'll get into a bit of my specialty, transition, and give you a ton of room for creativity. In this system, creativity will get you places.
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The Arena stands empty as the weekly shows have not started. The lights start to go on in the middle of the massive space, highlighting a standard wrestling ring. Lights start to flicker on slowly, making their way up to a curtain. When all are finally lit, one man walks through to no Pomp and Circumstance that would befit one of his name. The Dragon walks down the entrance ramp and rolls into the ring. He runs to the far ropes and bounces off of them, testing them. He walks back to the center of the ring and looks around the arena. He suddenly calls out.

"Alright Randy, get out here so we can do this."

The Dragon walks over to the corner and waits for his opponent.

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OoC:As you can tell, Punctuation and Grammar are important. Since weekly matches haven't started, it's logically a Dark Match, so no point in posting extravagant intros with pyro and music. Keep it simple, yet give it detail.

OoC:Ok i will give it my best.
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The dragon is holding the mic waiting for randy then a massive man comes out the curtain and walks down the ramp focusing on his match.Then he gets in the ring and tests the ropes corner posts etc and grabs a mic.

RRR:"all the best".

they shake hands and the bell sounds

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OoC:how was that

OoC: It was alright, pretty basic. Capitalize some stuff, throw in some commas, and it's alright for now. from this point on, it's straight wrestling. Since your Profile says you're heel, Dragon will be the face.
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The Dragon and Rampage lock up in the center of the ring, and jockey for position. Dragon suddenly drops to one knee and arm drag's his opponent onto his back. Dragon keeps a hold of the arm and locks in a modified arm bar. Rampage growls and rolls around to face Dragon. He raises a boot and kicks the aggressor away.

OoC: Simple, no?

Rampage gets to his feet quickly, and the two lock up yet again. This time, it's Randy that gets control. He puts an arm wringer onto his opponent, and the veteran smacks his own arm to fight the pain. Dragon smirks at Randy and drops down, rolling out of the wringer, and continues to roll, locking Randy into one! Randy pulls his twisted arm up close, bringing his opponent with him, before pushing his rival to the ropes, unlocking the wringer. Dragon bounces off the ropes, and runs towards the far ropes. As he runs back, Rampage sticks his arm out, and delivers a good hard clothesline.

TBC by Randy
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Notice the simplicity? It all ties in nicely. Notice the detail as well

Ooc:Ill see what i can do with more detail
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Dragon makes it to his feet quickly.Rampage and dragon lock up again but this time the dragon starts overpowering rampage and then puts right leg behind rampages legs and hits a STO and covers Rampage while hooking the leg 1-2 Rampage kickout by lifting his left shoulder.then dragon screams and grabs RRRs left leg and stomps his inner left leg about 4 times.Then dragon lifts RR up by his hair and Dragon goes for a powerbomb but RRR flips Dragon over his head.Then Dragon is holding his lower back in pain and RRR hits a successful leg drop on Dragons neck.Then RRR locks an armbar on dragon but as soon as its locked in dragon breaks out of it.Then RRR gets annoyed and punches the referree.After that the dragon makes it to his feet and RR turns around and dragon hits a spinebuster on RRR and covers him and the count goes to 10 but theres no ref.

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Ooc:how was that

OoC: Well, first of all, you punched the ref. In most Fed's, thats an immediate DQ. Since there's no real rules posted in this fed it's kind of diluted so I'm not quite sure what to say. Spelling could use some work along with the grammar. Other than that, an impressive post moveset-wise! You're getting better already, just add some description to your posts.
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The Dragon slams the mat in frustration and walks over to the ref. He checks to see if he's okay, and turns back to Randy Rampage. He grabs the big man by the hair, and lifts him up, but suddenly his arms are knocked away! Randy growls menacingly, and irish whips his opponent to the far corner. Dragon hits it hard, and Rampage follows him, running fast. Dragon barely gets a chance for a breath before getting crushed by a body splash.

Rampage finally has some solid control in this match, and looks at Dragon in the corner. He pulls back, and unleashes a furious chop that echoes throughout the empty arena! Dragon's face scrunches up in pain as his chest turns red from the blow. The Ruthless Wrestler pulls back and lands yet another chop to the stomach. He pulls back for a third and final, but Dragon ducks and steps behind his opponent!

Rampage chops thin air, and looks dazed! He turns around and sees Dragon winding up for a superkick, but his boot is caught! The big man takes that leg, pulls it in and grabs Dragon around the waist. He lifts his opponent into the air, and deposits him on the outside!

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OoC: This is a key part in any match. Your guy has control, and he's just thrown Dragon to the outside. Remember to keep it REAL. As well, introduce the announcers in this next post through this format:

Announcer 1(Name): Blah Blah Blah
In SFW it'd be like...
Ted Cedar: Oh my! He just dumped Dragon straight on his head, thats gotta hurt!

Lets see what you can do!

Ooc:Ok ill call them C1 and C2
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The dragon hits the outside and RRR starts beating his chest in excitment,then RRR climbs up the top rope an waits for the dragon to get up he does and out of no where RRR hits a crossbody of the top.Then both men are down and RRR gets up on his feet.

C1:What a match this has been it has been so close that has got to be it.
c2:what a crossbody to the outside a highly doubt it.

Then RRR rolls back in the ring and the dragon follows.After RRR grabs the dragon and goes for a vertical suplex but the dragon turns it into a northern lights and covers him 1-2 kickout
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i should of added more commentery

OoC: Not the best post, probably your worst of the match. If RRR just hit Dragon with a crossbody on the outside, Dragon would not have the energy to get back up, and would need RRR to either pull him back in, or the ref would start a ten count. Still need to work on the grammar. Detail is important as well. RRR just hitting a crossbody and then standing up is kind of unrealistic...
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Dragon holds his back with pain after that crossbody, and walks over to Randy. He grabs him by the hair and drags him over to the ropes. He places Rampage's neck across the second rope, and runs to the far side of the ring. He bounces back and charges towards Rampage, landing a knee right across his back! Randy clutches his throat with pain, and falls backwards onto his rear, holding his throat. Dragon smiles to himself and stands beside his opponent. He grabs the top rope, and executes a handstand! He suddenly turns around with vertical, and swings his legs down, sending them through the top and middle ropes, planting Ruthless right in the face with a dropkick!

Fans: UWC! UWC!

C1: Holy Crap! He just broke 'Ruthless' Randy Rampage's nose! That's gotta hurt!

C2: Pfft... I bet Randy didnt even feel it...

Dragon pushes himself up to his feet and walks to the corner for a breather. Meanwhile, Rampage makes his way to all fours, and puts a hand up to his nose. He pulls it away with spots of blood decorating it. He growls loudly, and Dragon walks over. The Veteran leaps into the air, and lands a leg drop across the back of Rampage's head, planting him face first into the mat! Rampage rolls away from Dragon, clutching his face in pain.

C2: What an asshole... NOW Rampage's nose is broken!

C1: Yep, and there's the blood to prove it!

Rampage tries to wipe away the blood from his face, but it just keeps coming. He uses the ropes to help himself up, and sees Dragon coming. As the Veteran walks over, The Ruthless One drops down and delivers a quick firemans carry that takes him to the mat...

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OoC: Notice the Bolding on the Voices? Makes it look nicer, professional even. Now lets see a submission